This is an interesting Wikipedia page, so much so a work in progress, that it illustrates the shortcomings of Wikipedia.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asadullah_Khalid
I picked it because I know the official concerned, but also because the more obvious Afghan topics — such as Mullah Omar, Hamid Karzai, Kabul — appear fully informed and well-sourced.
It is an entry is about the Afghan minister of tribal affairs, Asadullah Khalid, and remains incomplete. It is almost incoherent to the average reader in parts, and does not give a rounded responsible biography of the man.
It suffers from a lack of contributors, which is possibly an indication that comparatively few Afghans have access to internet and have an interest or knowledge that they can contribute to Wikipedia. But it also probably suffers from the fact that there is little published material on someone who is a less well known Afghan official, and who generally avoids on-the-record interviews.
After ten years of American operations in Afghanistan, there are hundreds, even thousands of computer-literate people who could contribute knowledgeably to this entry, yet they have not.
The introduction is not incorrect but lacks dates and has not been updated with his latest appointment a few months ago. This is important since he is now the Afghan government’s senior official in southern Afghanistan, taking the place of President Karzai’s assassinated brother. There is a good photo illustrating the page.
The biography is not incorrect but very light on detail, indicating a paucity of knowledgeable contributors of this subject. Afghans who are knowledgeable perhaps do not know how or do not have the means to contribute. Foreign reporters or western officials who may know the details are perhaps the types not inclined to contribute to Wikipedia.
The most interesting part is the second part of the biography which is clearly a contribution from a local Afghan reporter, giving an eye-witness account of Mr Khalid at the scene of bombing by American forces of Afghan civilians. He quotes the governor criticizing the American action, and saying that there were no Taliban in the village and NATO bombs killed nine people and wounded eleven, among them women and children.
The first reference, which gives the source of this reporting, is a dead link. The reporting appears genuine, if not very clearly written, and almost certainly by an Afghan reporter who was at the scene. The difficulty is it is first hand reporting and without a published source will be considered unreliable. This is a shortcoming of Wikipedia for subjects that are new and news events unfolding, such as in Afghanistan.
There is a note, presumably from Wikipedia, that comments on this passage:
“This article contains weasel words: vague phrasing that often accompanies biased or unverifiable information. Such statements should be clarified or removed. (September 2011)”
It may be interesting to watch what happens.
Further down there is a slight section on torture allegations, citing two articles by the Canadian Broadcasting Company which alleged that Mr Khalid was involved in the torture of detainees and the bombing of a United Nations vehicle. The reports are slight and there is little context to explain the Canadian role in southern Afghanistan.
Overall the Wikipedia entry on Asadullah Khalid is inadequate, and as it stands it is an unfair biography of the man and his achievements. In fact, beyond a few bare facts, there is very little information on his work of the last ten years in the Karzai government.
But the entry also uncovers one possible problem with Wikipedia. The torture allegations carry more weight because they appeared in the western media than the first hand reporting by an Afghan eyewitness reporter which is deemed unreliable because it is unpublished, or the link to its published version does not work.
Wikipedia relies on published sources for its credibility and so may come under the same accusations that the Western media experiences, that of Western bias in deciding what is notable, what is important and what is accurate.
Finally, I could write an accurate and fair biography of this man from my own knowledge, but I would probably find it hard to find published sources to confirm the details.
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